Production Diary number 23

I have now made my first draft, but before i make the improvements I wanted to ask my target audience what they though about it and how i could improve it. In the video below  I have edited together a sample of five students to help me out. They themselves like the genre of rock, so they know what they're talking about, also being media students themselves, can give me a general feedback. I am going to take into account what they have said to improve and try to add that to my final product. I can also see my own improvements which I need to make. I was also thinking of making another front cover, as it cold be a special eddtion.